Monday, December 28, 2009

A taste of something new

So I have been toying with this one for about six months.  Most stories rattle around in my brain for a year or more before I put anything more down that a scribble of an idea.  Of course for any idea its like joining a new community.  I have to get to know the people first.  See how they interact.  Learn the lay of the land before any glimmer of plot can hope to come to life on the page.  So here is a first scene.  Please if there is anyone out there reading.  Let me know what you think.  I'm not to grammatical/technical errors yet but always appreciate a correct spelling or note on missing punctuation.  -Thanks



ROSE BERG


The rain came down sideways, turning streaming streaks of white in the headlamps.  The sky was an unrelenting black.  Harold had just finished a second shift at the mill and his chin bobbed dangerously down to his chest.  It was only his knowledge of every curve and rut that kept him from running into the ancient trees that lined either side of the road like sentinels standing shoulder to shoulder.  His eyes drooped shut.  It was the sudden pull on the wheel that woke him with a start.  He was heeding straight for a Douglas fir.  Harold turned the wheel hard right and he heard the popped of the tire as it hopped back on to the road.  Suddenly he was sliding.  He had over compensated.  Pulling the wheel hard the other direction help him steer clear of the ditch and the rear axle started to come round.  He pumped the brakes to turning the wheel left then right to control the spin.  All of the sudden she was standing there in the middle of the road, her eyes wide with terror like the deer he had hit last winter on this very same road.
Harold forgot all he knew about controlling a spin and instinctively slammed on the brakes.  The back wheels dropped off of the side of road and the tail end of his truck came to rest against a tree.  Harold swung open his door and half fell out of his truck.  He glanced at his back wheels.  One was still on the road but the other hung precariously in the air.  The tree was the thing that kept him from dropping off the road completely.  There was a slim chance he would be able to get it free.  Then remembering the vision of the girl he climbed out of the ditch to see whether she was real or his dream. 
She was real, standing at the edge of the headlights shivering.  He hadn’t hit her.  He took a deep breath only to expel it again as he reached the road and really looked at her.  She was soaking wet and shivering. For an instant he thought she was naked.  He stammered and blushed.  Then he went to his passenger side door and grabbed the wool blanket Evelyn had left behind on the seat. She was white as a sheet and the thin white garment she was wearing left little to the imagination.  His dropping jaw stirred her senses somewhat.  The blanket was forgotten as she reached across her body, covering herself in a pose like the stereoscope picture his wife had of the woman coming out of the clamshell. Her brown hair clung to her face in thick ropes that stretched past her shoulders. His breath caught in his chest and he choked as a bit of salvia went down the wrong set of pipes.  She reached for the blanket he was too stunned to offer her. 
She wrapped it tightly around her shoulders.  With the downpour they were caught in, it was soaked almost as soon as she wrapped up in it but her modesty recalled his senses somewhat.  He felt his face go red and he was too warm.  The damn prohibitionists had them jumping at any stray thought.  As if a man was responsible for a stray dog that took a dump in his neighbors yard just because he saw it pass by.  He straightened the blanket of over her shoulders and made a feeble gesture to hold it shut over her legs that were still exposed.
“Didn’t mean to frighten you.  I almost didn’t see you there.  What are you doing out here in the middle of the night?”
The water ran down her face as she looked up to him utterly bewildered.
“Did you have an accident, honey?”  He asked looking around for her car, anything but look at her. He was probably old enough to be her father, or a very older brother.  Somehow that did not help.
The road was empty.  She continued to blink at him. 
“Where’s your car?”  Harold scratched his head as he led her to the passenger seat of his truck.  “Did you fall overboard?” It happened sometimes.  In the summer it was not uncommon for a small yacht to come into the harbor and sail up river.  Most of those boats had a skipper but every once and a while some ignoramus would think he could pilot his own ship and get caught too far up river when the tide was heading out. On a few rare occasions boats had been known to run aground.
The engine of his truck sputtered and choked.  The headlight dimmed and went out.  Harold groaned.  “Just sit there and think about it while I try to get this old heap going.  Then we will try to get you someplace warm.”
Harold felt around behind her seat until he found the crank and moved around to the front of the truck.  He fumbled around for the crankshaft but could not get the crank in position.  It slipped and slammed into his knuckles.  His knuckle was instantly in his mouth.  His hand went numb, then hot and just before started to throb.  He was wide wake now. 
“Slide over to the drivers side honey.”  He shouted over the rain, gesturing with his head as he nursed his bruised hand.  If felt like he broke something.  Not that Evelyn would let it slow him down any.  He squinted into the cab wondering if the girl had heard him.  “I need you to pop it in gear as soon as I get clear.  We see if that can jump us out of the ditch.”
For once he was glad his truck was as old as it was.  He bought it from the army surplus and it had four-wheel drive.  He had a better shot at getting it out of the ditch than the newer model he and Evelyn had been looking at to replace it.  Of course that was before the crash and they had money to spare.  Now he worked nights to cover their expenses and keep the hotel open and their staff consisted of himself and Evelyn.
Harold felt around until he was sure he had the crank in the right spot.  He gave it several cranks before the engine roared to life and he jumped out of the way.  Nothing happened.  The engine coughed and sputtered.  Harold walked to the side of the vehicle.  The girl was still in the passenger seat looking terrified.
“Don’t you know how to drive honey?”  He grunted in frustration as she shook her head.  He wondered if she really was scared of if she was foreign.  She certainly didn’t look like she belonged here in the woods, falling off a boat or otherwise.  He jumped up next to her and pushed her across the bench to the driver’s seat.  He gave her a quick lesson in how to get the engine in gear and give a little gas.
            “You got it?”
She nodded her head vigorously.  Having a task seemed to calm her a bit.
 “Is there anyone else with you?”  He asked.  She did not appear to be hurt in away, just cold and scared.  “You’re safe now but you have to tell me if there was anyone else with you when you ran aground.  I need to find them.”
She swallowed hard and shook her head.  Her body began to shake more violently.  Harold pulled the blanket tight over her shoulders. 
 “I guess I better just take you home with me.”
It was only a few minutes to Newport and home was just beyond that. The girl’s eyes widened.
Harold laughed heartily, his voice reverberating off the interior of the truck.  He had no illusions about his looks.  He was about as plain and ordinary as any man could get.  His days of chasing young girls had passed long ago, a fact for which he was uniquely grateful.  “No.  No, it’s nothing like that, as if I would.  Evelyn would kill be for sure.  Just remember to do what I told you and we’ll be out of here in a jiff.”
She nodded and Harold clucked between his teeth.  After a few more attempts they were out of the ditch and on their way home. It was an hour drive to the hospital but the hotel that he and Evelyn ran was only twenty minutes away.  This was going to take some explaining. Evelyn wouldn’t like it but he could reason with her that she wouldn’t she have been angrier if he had left the girl?  Either way, Harold had a feeling he would be sleeping on the small couch at the foot of their bed.  His back pinched sympathetically at the thought. 
He hoped he hadn’t broken any of the bottles of whiskey in the back.  Every one of them was already spoken for.  This was his civic run.  He had just enough to bribe the sheriff and his deputies to keep out of his business.  Then there were the three they would keep hidden under the front counter for any liberally minded guests.  Their ability to pour a something stronger than a soda was the only thing keeping their little hotel in business these days.  Losing any of them would certain of defeat the purpose of the bribe.

Wednesday, December 16, 2009

Writer's Block vs. Farmville.

In the paper this week there was an article devoted to explaining the popularity of facebook games such as Farmville and Mafia Wars.  I am guilty as charged and with the slow death of newspapers across the country, I am probably in the minority of those users who would have read the article.  As a writer I have used various distractions to temper the enemy of all prose know as writer's block.

In the early days, when the perfect pen and the perfectly ratty notebook were the tools of my trade, I used a deck of cards.  I would play solitaire while considering all possibilities of how to begin or jump start a stalled tale.  As my tools advanced, and I began to use a pc, my deck of cards made way for tetras.  Tetras was self defeating as the games need for spacial thinking required too much of my conscious mind and I only became more blocked.  From their I discovered the wonderful games of solitaire and mine sweep.  The beauty of these gems was that in the early days most employers did not know to remove this function on the computer.  I played this in the background of phone calls and between emails.

Those addictions followed me home and became a very effective distraction from any editing or writing I tried to do at home.  Then my sister introduced me to facebook.  It was such a lovely way to procrastinate and feel connected at the same time.  I refused invitation after invitation and many gifts from both Farmville and Mafia wars.  Then late one sleepless night, curiosity won out.  I accepted the invitation to become someone's neighbor.  Suddenly I had a green pasture and four different crops I could plant with a simply click of the mouse.  It wasn't until a month later that a farmville devotee showed me a few simple strategies  to make my farm "pay."

My list of neighbors grew and their ideas for the ideal farm were many and varied.  I realized that during my days of scheduled editing and writing, that it was easy enough by out a few minutes to harvest, plow and plant new crops.  Suddenly I was spending as much time tending my virtual farm as I was writing.  During the editing sessions it was easy to watch the clock and toggle from my chapter to my farm.

The addiction was worse than solitaire, spider solitaire and mine sweep combined.  I could create designs in my fields.  I could earn enough to by a tool shed, a barn and even a house.  I obsessed about reaching higher levels, getting there faster than my neighbor and playing catch up to players who had been playing a lot longer than I have.

As for the writing?  Well I am happy to report that I managed to get the editing done.  Although starting something new was much harder.  I had to go to coffee shops with my laptop to get any real work done. The connection speed on the 5 year old machine is deplorable and my animals could not move their heads and the plowing was terrible.  Friends started to block me because they had seen enough of homeless pink cows and moving on up posts.

So I confess to being a full on addict.  I'd love to talk more but I have some black berries to harvest.

Friday, December 11, 2009

Textnovel

I am currently posting two stories on Textnovel

Follow them by name:

The Raven and the Wolf ---

    Loyalty has its price and Engle will discover where his truly lie.  He makes a pack with a street waif and is tricked into taking him on as an apprentice and squire.  It might be the best mistake he ever made.  While Engle's past keeps them on the run, it is the mystery surrounding the child's true identity that proves fatal.

For Sarah --

    A novella loosely inspired by the early life of my Grandfather in Norway.  The names have changed

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Thursday, December 10, 2009

Simply put

I read this quote on a steeping tea bag this morning and I cannot get it out of my head for it's simple truth.

"As we grow old, the beauty steals inward."-  Ralph Waldo Emerson

I have forgotten much of my Emerson but this to me is like line of music.  It is one of those things I wish I had written.
 

Monday, December 7, 2009

Time to remember why

So as I venture into this new frontier of being an indy author, it is easy to lose sight of the reason I write.  There is a revolution happening in how people select and read books.  It is forcing big publishers to reconsider what they publish.  A conservative approach may well be the most dangerous thing they can do.   Nevertheless, they are printing fewer books and looking for brands they can build.  It makes it more difficult for an unknown to break into this world, hence the attraction of becoming an indy author.

There are many of us out there, peddling our wares for free hoping to gain notice.  We save our pennies to hire independent editors or risk typo's by taking the plunge without one.  It is possible to sell a book on the amazon market place and other etailers without a distributor.  It is a positive to have control over your work but a negative to think that anyone can do it or that it is easy.

I keep posting on Textnovel I see all levels of skill. I see budding young talent reaching out and making a community.  I see people who write because they have a computer or phone and therefore equate it to skill.  There are also consummate fan fiction writers who know how to turn out mainstream commercial plot lines.  And lastly I see a trend of extremely talented authors eager just to get their ideas out there.

The point is, electronic publishing is like the ultimate democracy.  It is exciting to see what new voices will arise out of all this-and not just from the plethora of fan fiction sites, but real talent that might otherwise never be seen or heard.

Out of it all I want to always remember why it is I write.  I write for the love of words, for that feeling of being swept away to another world and presenting that character that makes us step outside of ourselves. I write for the same reason I read.  It is an exploration, an experiment and a means to comprehend the world we live in.

 

Friday, November 27, 2009

Editor's Pick

The Raven and the Wolf  has just be selected as Editor's Choice this week on www.Textnovel.com

Thank you for your votes and for becoming fans on the site of my story.  I am continuing to post chapters on the site.  It's easy to become a fan and to vote. You will have to set up an account in order to read my story and in order for your votes to count. 

Once you have signed up it's easy to hit the thumbs up and the little cell phone icon to become a fan.  Don't get scared by the icon.  They won't be calling you but you will receive notification any time I add a chapter via email.  If you wish you can follow the story by phone but I don't recommend it for standard text message reading format.  I am too long winded to fit into 140-160 characters.

I appreciate your support.

Friday, November 20, 2009

It's Friday!

Just a quick tip about following any of my stories on www.textnovel.com. You have to sign up if you would like to vote and/or follow the story. You can do both and both votes and following count to my overall score. You can only vote once and this is to make sure that the voting is fair and calculating the number of individuals following any given story.

Due to the format of text novel, I have broken my chapters and paragraphs into small chunks to make it easier to read online. I have also played around a bit with the order of the chapters. Please feel free to comment on what you think. I know, I know, poor novelist can't help tweaking. It is the curse of every artist.

In addition to The Raven and the Wolf (current score of 18-thank you) I have added a new tale entitled For Sarah. This is a novella inspired by the real life story of my Grandfather. As a child in Norway he had the very real responsibility of providing for his younger siblings at the tender age of twelve. It is a bitter sweet look at a child forced to grow up too quickly but who learns how to play again with the help of a toothless merchant marine named Smiley.

Monday, November 16, 2009

Follow the story

If you would like to continue to follow The Raven and the Wolf, please go to www.Textnovel.com and look it up by name or by my name. You can vote for it and sign up to get notifications of each new chapter. I should have chapters 1-10 up by the end of the week and will begin posting new to you chapters after that.

On my blog I will continue to post short stories and novel excerpts from my backlog of material. I will also keep you posted on my progress toward becoming a published author.

Saturday, September 19, 2009

The Raven and the Wolf: Chapter 10

Chapter 10

Tim had no idea where he was going but he followed the man called Engle without the slightest hesitation. His determined steps and eager energy infused Tim with same sense of urgency. Ever since he had entered Traimiss he had heard stories of this man. There was something about the square symmetry of his forehead and his pale blue eyes that inspired trust. Engle lead him back behind The Harpy where a horse black as coal stood waiting. Tim had never been on the back of such a fine horse. He was a little disappointed when Engle hefted to burlap sacks full of grain on its back as and tied them to the saddle. He ran his hand over the horse’s muzzle and whispered something in its ear. Then he slapped it roundly on the hindquarters and the magnificent beast took off without them. Engle patted Tim on the head and led him on a parallel path through the overgrown east gate and into the shadows of the forest. It was hardly a path, more like a scrub trail a fox would follow but it kept them hidden from the road.

“Why did you do that?”

“I’m hoping that we may trick the witless and buy ourselves some time.”

“Do you think Prince Daven will really come after me?” Tim was astonished and his head felt light with the sudden realization that he had truly triumphed.

“I think you did yourself more than proud but you have more to fear of keeping in company with me than your tangle with him will bring. For my part in that, I apologize.” Engle smiled. His lips disappeared in his salt and pepper beard. “Now that we are passed the gate, such as it is. You can take this trail north if you like and get to the other side of Traimiss.” Tim’s heart sank. Engle hesitated and added. “Or you can come with me now and I’ll attend to your hand.”

Tim’s heart leapt with excitement. He knew better than to trust anyone but with Engle it was as if all the worry and doubt was gone. He hardly noticed the steady stream of blood dripping from his hand, or the dull throb beneath the vise like pressure of Engle’s fingers digging in his wrist. His wound was a badge of honor and Tim was proud of it. “So what is your plan? Where will we go?”

Engle raised his left brow and smiled. “I know of a safe place. I was going there anyway after I had concluded my business in town.”

Tim suddenly worried that Engle might not have reason enough to let him come with him. “I don’t think I’ll be allowed back at the king’s stables so you could say I was looking for a place.” He shrugged, noticing that Engle kept moving forward. “I could go with you.”

“Very well, though I’m not certain what kind of welcome to expect.”

“Better than here?” Tim felt a momentary twinge of alarm. He did not want to make his situation worse.

“Infinitely, even in the worst of circumstances.” Engle winked. Then he suddenly stopped. His face turned grave and he raised his finger to his lips. He crouched down and Tim followed suit. He had not heard what Engle did but he knew better than to question it his order. After a while Engle waved the all clear. They started walking again.

“Do you have a name child?” Engle asked.

“What is yours?” Tim replied, trying to change the subject. He gathered Engle had trouble similar to his and felt a kindred feeling toward him. Being with him felt safe regardless of the soldiers pursuing them. Yet he could not forget the disastrous consequences the last time he gave someone his name.

“Engle.”

“Do they want you dead?”

“Some do and I think any who didn’t probably will now thanks to my untimely appearance. Suffice to say I have long since worn out my welcome in the realm.”

“I’m glad you’re here.” Tim offered.

Engle chuckled softly and squeezed his wrist until Tim could no longer feel his hand.

“Now, I have answered several of your questions. You still haven’t answered mine. What is your name?”

“My father was called Tim, I think that is good enough for me.” Tim offered reluctantly.

Engle smiled as if he knew. “Tim it is. I must say you keep some interesting things in this pouch of yours.”

Panicked Tim reached up to his neck. It was gone. His throat closed and he turned back up the path. Engle held him fast.

“I have to go back.”

“You’ll do no such thing. Here my boy.” Engle dangled his pouch in front of his nose. Tim reached for it but he tucked it back inside his tunic.

“Give it back.”

“All in good time. I have questions for you but for now we best make haste.”

Tim looked round behind. “I don’t see them yet. Give me back my pouch and I’ll be on my way.” He regretted trusting Engle as much as he already had.

“Child, I am no thief. I know this is yours that makes it a good insurance against your leaving and leading them back to me.”
“I wouldn’t do that.”

Engle’s mouth turned crooked. “Not intentionally but it is what would happen. Now, if we are very fortunate they will follow Gavran and miss our path.”

“That’s why you weighed him down with the grain?”

His brows went up. “That and the fact that I as good as purchased the grains. I hope they might have a chance of reaching home.”

Tim realized he was teasing. “If his tracks are deeper in the soil then they will think he carries us on his back.”

“If I haven’t instructed them better than to fall for the ruse. I never thought I’d wish for evidence of my failure. You’re a clever boy. Where did you learn to give consideration to deception and escape?”

Before Tim could answer Engle’s hand was over his mouth. He threw his cloak over their heads and dove under a thicket, shoving Tim ahead of him. Engle drew the edge of his cloak under the bush as the men were suddenly on top of them. A man dismounted, his leather-shod foot narrowly missing Tim’s head as he brushed against the thicket. He knelt. His breath was so close Tim felt it move the air by his cheek. Surely he sensed them. The man removed his glove, rolling it awkwardly against his thigh to do so. He checked the depth of the crescent shape prints of Gavran’s trail. Picking up a clump of dirt he rolled it between his fingers.

The man stood in that one place, as if waiting for them to reveal themselves. Tim’s heart beat so loudly he was certain they would be discovered. The man took a deep breath, pausing as if catching their scent before slowly exhaling. Tim began to tremble. He reminded himself that this was not the first time he had been in danger. He closed his eyes trying to use that awareness to slow his heart and prevent the hot stinging tears which threatened his eyes. Engle moved his hand to the center of his back. Its strength and warmth leached away some of Tim’s terror and his heart begin to slow. His breath came more slowly and the tremors stopped. He did not know how long they lay there before the men moved away. Tim was paralyzed until Engle raised him to his feet.

“I hate him.” Tim whispered. He should have known that any momentary triumph had its price. Tim brushed the weeds from his clothes, his hands trembling rebelliously. His eyes started watering in earnest as the circulation returned to his wounded hand and it started to throb with something more than pain.

“That wasn’t the prince. Don’t worry I think we’ve already seen the worst of his bark.”

Engle gently took Tim’s hand and examined his wound. “I am sorry you made such a bad bargain coming with me. I will see to it that you have adequate compensation to get you safely away.”

Tim remembered that other than that defiant bite of the baker’s bread, he had not eaten all day. With the rush of adrenaline beginning to wane, he was becoming more aware of his hunger. At least that is how he understood his growing weakness.

Tim finally looked down at his mangled hand, mistakenly hoping to derive strength of will. The front of his tunic was crimson. The blood started to form a small pool at his feet. He thought of the reddish mud that formed on the road after the slaughter. It looked just the same when his parents died, drawing their final breaths as he watched high above clinging to the rafters. He could not look away from what Engle was doing. The ground began to spin. He looked up but the trees were swaying. He slumped over and vomited, just missing Engle’s feet.

“Is it the blood?” Engle asked sidestepping the mess. He ripped off a part of his cloak and wrapped it around his hand. “Try not to look at it.”

When he had finished and the world had stopped spinning Tim looked over at him and asked: "Where are we going?"

Engle sighed: “It is deeper than I thought. I don’t have enough water to wash it out and sustain you and me both. We are going to head toward the river. That is of course, if you have no other duels to fight this afternoon? Do you think you can walk?”

Tim mustered a smile. “To bad we don’t have your horse.”

“Should I carry you?’

Tim shook his head vigorously. It was humiliating enough that he had gotten sick.

“Had I known I’d have company on the journey back, I’d planned differently. I never think to tie another horse in the woods for these occasions.”

Engle carefully picked their path along hard ground to minimize their trail. The sun shot bright arrows through the blanket of the trees. The light mottled the forest floor with shots of bright gold in amongst the mosaic of green and ruddy brown. The rough bark of the pine trees reminded Tim of thick cracked calluses, the kind his father had. Tim focused on the islands of sunlight to keep from thinking about his hand. Engle had not lessened his grip.

“What is your family name, perhaps I know it?” Engle asked after some minutes had passed.

Tim shook his head. He said too much already.

“You have a shrewd eye and a quick hand. You caught Prince Daven off guard today. With a proper education and training with the right master you could make something of yourself.”

Tim kept his eyes low but his heart jumped excitedly. He imagined what it would have been like to be able to save Ivan and Elsa by his sword.

“If you pulled that feat on one of his fellows, I think Daven would have been as good as his word and taken you as a squire. Unfortunately, he is too young for that kind of generosity when he suffers humiliation. But I suppose it is a rare thing that a man ever reaches that point and royal favor is a privilege easily lost.” Engle paused. “What I can offer you is far better than living in barns and looking for handouts. Perhaps you will consider it an option.”

Tim watched broken twigs crunch beneath his feet as Engle’s words slowly sunk in. He wondered if it was an invitation or an order. Not that it mattered either way. Going back was not an option.

“When can I have my pouch back?”

“In good time. You haven’t answered all my questions.”

"Are you a holy man?" he asked. Tim did not know why he asked him that. It was something to say.

"No, I am no holy man," Engle snickered.

“You are a healer then?”

"I have some knowledge of the healing arts but if you will follow me, I can introduce you to someone who is. But if you are looking for a holy man I’m afraid I cannot help you. I have never met anyone who truly fits that description. Have you?”

"Father Peter." He never cared for the Father. He had seen him relieve himself behind the stables. He was not so different from other men.

"Ah, I take it that he is a holy man in your estimation?" Engle asked, not forcing a response.

"He is a priest.”

“Is that all it takes?”

“They say it is. I know he thinks he is. He preaches in the village when they are tired of him at the palace. I don’t care for any of his talks in either place.”

"Do they tire of him often, at the palace? I heard he was much in favor."

Tim shrugged not knowing how to answer. They came upon a little creek that ran close to the river.

“This will sting, but the water is fast moving and clean.”

Engle pointed where the water ran over the rocks. He held his hand under the flow of the stream. Then he removed the bandage and with his thumb he gently opened the wound letting the water flush through it. He rolled away dried blood and weeks of grime under his fingertips gradually revealing a pink palm Tim hardly remembered. The cold water burned like fire and Tim’s eyes filled with tears. He was determined not to let any drop. Engle pinched the wound as it started bleeding again. He opened a small satchel hidden under the folds of his cloak. He drew out several long yellow green leaves that smelled like foul fish. He rolled them between his palms until their stink filled the air. Then he laid them over Tim’s hand. The weeds burned more that the icy water. Tears streamed down his face but he did not whimper or pull away.

“This will help draw out any blood poison in the wound and knit the flesh together.” He brushed the hair out of Tim’s eyes and dried his tears. “So tell me do you repeat what they say about Father Peter because they say it or because you believe it?"

Tim hesitated. He did not like any priest but at least Father Peter had never tried to touch him. "No one has ever asked me. My mother told that a holy man is one that serves God but that they are hard to find.”

Engle tore part of the lining of his cloak and bound Tim’s hand with it. Then he took a skin of bitter wine and made Tim take a health swig of it. The liquid burned almost as much as his weed bandage but it gave a feeling of strength to his limbs as its warmth spread.

“I agree with your mother. How’s your hand?”

The slimy green leaves started to sooth as much as they pained, the throbbing subsided and the burning sensation stopped. Engle looked at the low hanging sun and frowned.

“It will be dark soon. We should get going. There are wolves in this forest and we have enough enemies as it is. I know a place not far from here that will provide us shelter until tomorrow.”

Engle led him to a growth of cedar trees, each as thick and as tall as they other. They had grown together in a clump forming a crescent shape. They were so close that Tim could hardly slip his fingers between them. Their feathery branches made a soft rustling noise as they caught in the breeze but their thick trunks blocked out all the other noise in the forest.

“Father Peter should try giving his sermons here.” Tim whispered in awe. The aroma from the trees was spicy and pungent. In the shelter of that natural shield, Tim felt closer to God than he had in the hard grey stones of any church he had entered.

“Shh! They might be insulted. But indeed many have prayed here. It has always been a safe haven. We will be shielded from the wind and concealed from anyone approaching from the trail or the river.”

“It’s beautiful. Thank you.”

Engle’s smiled and his voice softened. “Welcome to Duessa.”

Friday, September 11, 2009

The Raven and the Wolf: Chapter 9

Engle reached up and poked at the curtain to part a small hole where he could peak through to the other side and watch as soldier after soldier pushed his way into The Harpy. His hands itched every time they came into contact with the undyed wool and turn bright red over his freshly healed burns. He had spent the several days hiding in Delilah’s back room with nothing but an ale splattered bloodstained cloth separating him from the rest of her patrons. Yet he learned that with her and Simon defending the worn partition, it was a good as any oak door.

The burning farm Engle encountered was only the first of many. They were not random victims-nor did he believe that the attacks would continue to be confined to the Andronian border. What was happening would sure to spread like a cancer. These were not the typical raiders. He had seen enough purses laden with gold nailed to doorposts to know that no bribe could sate their blood thirst-on the contrary it seemed only to incense their rage. They cut a swath of violence across wetlands and deep into Drake where he eventually lost their trail. Engle came back to Traimiss because he realized if he was going to have any hope of stopping the raids it would take the strength of the Lisseon army. He hoped, rather than believed, William would look at the desperateness of the situation and overlook his transgression for the greater good.

The fact that there had been an attack on Great Road and only days before King Waldhar’s caravan crossed it, would certainly lend weight to Engle’s warning and defend his bold return. As storming the castle gates was not a plausible way to gain an audience, he had been waiting at The Harpy until either Stephen or Daven showed up. Delilah and her obliging girls had filled him in on all of the gossip in town-who was married, who was pregnant, who was pregnant and unmarried that they were now determined to torment. It was everything Engle did not need to know with a smattering of what he did.

Engle slumped back against the wall and closed his eyes. He did not know how long he dozed there but his senses jarred him awake at a grumbling protest from Simon. Engle looked through the curtain in time to see Daven toss his purse across the room. His eyes followed the money to Delilah’s hand. She shook his direction and winked.

Daven looked taller than he remembered. In the endless drivel that Delilah’s girls had shared was also the story of what had happened between Daven and Byron. Byron entered The Harpy only an hour before. Engle pulled at the hole until he could see where Byron was sitting. His return to duty was reportedly premature but there were no doubts about the man’s determination. Engle remembered him as an undisciplined fighter for all his stony silence. He learned control it in time, nevertheless the incident at the games was not unforeseeable. Engle had warned many young men to temper their strikes when facing him. Daven was no exception. He was gifted but untried in battle. He could hardly be expected to match Byron, a seasoned soldier. He lacked his cruelty and his rage. The match ought not to have happened.

Engle watched Daven slam down one stein and tip back another. The arrangement was that Delilah would think up some pretense to draw Daven behind the curtain, where Engle would have time to tell his story. If Daven maintained his current pace he would useless inside of a half an hour. It was going to be a very long afternoon. Engle leaned back and closed his eyes. At least he could catch up on his sleep.

“Wake up!”

Engle started, knocking his head against the wall. Delilah kicked the bench for good measure. The curtain was wide open. Engle turned his head quickly.

“You won’t want to be missing this.” Delilah barked. Her body was the only thing shielding him from plain view.

“You needn’t bother. There’s no one here to see you. He’s emptied the place.”

Engle’s first thought was that Daven had challenged Byron again. He threw on his cloak and drew the hood low over his eyes. Delilah grabbed him by the hand and led him outside.

The sun was a blistering white light compared to the dimness of The Harpy. They skirted the edge of a cheering mob. He had trouble keeping up as he was whipped into bystanders and pulled through openings in the crowd that closed before he reached them. He mumbled apologies. She whirled him in and around people, releasing his hand with the same abruptness so that he nearly toppled over four villagers standing at the crowd’s perimeter. His awe of her brutal strength was quickly forgotten as he raised his eyes to the entertainment. His hand fell to his sword as anger blazed up into his chest.

The boy could not be more than nine or ten though it was possible he might have been as old as twelve if his impoverished circumstances were long standing. A young page or squire would have been equally inexcusable as an opponent but at least there they might have had some training. Engle forgot all about caution and charged ahead. Delilah was faster and threw her arms around his waist to prevent him. Again he her strength surprised him.

“Think of why you are here.” She warned.

Engle stopped. He hated her for being right.

"Have you reached your decision?" Daven slurred, looming heavily to one side as he tried not to look as stinking drunk as he was.

“How much has he had to drink?” Engle hissed.

Delilah shrugged. “At least five or six.”

“You were supposed to keep him sober enough to be useful to me.” Engle growled back.

“Humph.” She grunted back at him. “He’d have been sober enough in the morning for you to talk him. No one would have questioned Simon for dragging him in the back room to sleep it off. Neatly done. Just like we agreed.”

Her comment angered him but he was too focused on what was happening to challenge her. Engle raised his hand to show he would wait. He left her and pushed his way through the crowd. He watched with begrudging admiration as the boy squared his shoulders, jutted out his chin and jerked his head at Daven.

"Sire I beg you..." pleaded a voice just behind him. Engle recognized the voice as Captain Williams’. Williams was one of the few officers not afraid of Daven and Engle felt a glimmer of hope that this would be the end of the matter. He tugged his cloak a little tighter around his chin.

“The king and he subjects commend you, my dwarf knight!" Daven made an exaggerated bow in the direction of the boy but his eyes never left the crowd. “Now, time for you to get your hands on a proper weapon.”

The villagers laughed and applauded, ignorant chattel. Daven stepped up to Williams and held out his hand for his sword. A smile played upon his lips but his eyes were stone cold. Williams gave over his sword and said something in a low voice Engle could not quite make out.

"Tell me do you really suppose you can win?" Daven called over to the boy, still standing toe to toe with Williams.

"I can always use ten in gold," was the firm reply.

Daven smiled and Engle thought he saw a twinge of genuine admiration touch his eyes. The feeling was not enough for him to stop the contest. He handed the boy William’s sword.

"I suppose you can handle steel reasonably well."

Engle had seen enough. He started forward, but someone suddenly wrapped their arms around his waist. Engle spun around furiously to see Delilah.

“If you meant for me to do nothing then why bring me out here to witness it.” He shoved her away but her grip was like iron.

“Think what you’re doing.” She whispered hastily. “I have no mind to lose my head over you. Nor do I think you spent the better part of the week camping in my back room waiting to talk to him only to give yourself away for that scrap. Let him finish his business here and we will grab him afterwards.”

Engle knew she was both wrong and right. He could not formulate an argument one way or another. Hundreds if not thousands of lives depended on him getting his message through to the king and Daven was his best chance for that. Engle let Delilah drag him into the crowd.

In the meantime the boy had taken William’s sword. He held it both hands and raised it shakily over his shoulders. It was foolish to think he had any chance, yet Engle believed in him.

The boy swung his hips awkwardly. He shifted his weight from foot to foot to find his balance. The sword wobbled and wavered until his settled into his grip. Daven let him take his practice swings. A nod from the boy signaled he was ready, as if he had been fighting in contests all his life. Lieutenant Roberts stepped forward to judge the game. He waved them forward until they faced each other across an imaginary line. They held their swords forward waiting for his signal. Roberts nodded first to Daven then to the boy. Roberts seemed to hesitate as he looked at the boy. Daven was shaking his head like a swimmer trying to knock water out of their ears. Engle knew that the weight of his sword in his hand was more apt to awakening his deadly skill. But no amount of head shaking could awaken reason out of drunkenness.

Daven made two large passes several feet clear of the boy. The gestures were exaggerated, intended to push the boy back and absolutely under control. The crowd gasped at the effect and the boy took several steps backward. Daven winked, presumably at Williams. Then he held his arms wide open inviting an attack. The boy made a few ill-guided strikes that Daven dodged easily. The boy had spirit but little control. The mob laughed and cheered. Daven jumped about in mock horror and fear of the boy's unsteady sword. His insolence angered Engle even more. Delilah kept a firm hand on his arm.

The boy lost his balance, stumbled and rallied. He kept swinging but was breathing too heavy to sustain more than a few minutes of fighting. The weight of William’s sword was too much. Daven toyed with the child, hopping briefly into striking distance and then moving out of range before the boy could raise his weapon higher than his waist. As the boy’s blows slowed and drooped. Daven stepped forward and made a playful jab that came very close to striking flesh. The boy dropped his sword and jumped back. The sword tangled his feet but he regained and kept himself out of the dirt. The crowd laughed. The boy turned scarlet.

Daven let him pick up his sword. Clearly he had done just what he intended.

Engle plucked off Delilah’s fingers: “Let go of me woman!”

“You want to stop this.”

Engle spun on her angrily.

“You’ll not be meeting with yon prince I’ll wager.” She drew her hand back and opened her palm. “I don’t suppose you came without some proof of your story. Trust me to get the message to the king. Then you can stop this farce in any way you see fit.”

Engle had with him the coin the burned woman had given him. That was his proof to the king and possibly his way back into favor. He did not want to give it to her but what choice did he have?

As Engle fumbled for the coin, the boy was driven back into a corner. He lost his sword again as he twisted away from Daven’s clumsy advance. Daven gestured for him to pick it up. Engle know what was coming next. As the boy bent down, Daven planted his foot squarely in his bottom and his face planted squarely in the dirt. All his worldly treasures flew from his tattered pockets and scattered on the street. As he clamored to his feet he snagged the leather string around his neck and a small pouch landed on the ground. Howling laughter accompanied his humiliation.

"First rule never turn your back on your opponent." Daven counseled smugly.

Engle only had eyes for the boy. He scrambled to his feet and spit out a mouthful of dirt. He squared his shoulders and tightened his jaw. With one hand, suddenly strengthened by rage, he clasped his sword as he wiped his cheek with the back of the other. Engle held his breath. The boy struck back at the prince with all his might. He was not sure if the boy made contact until he saw that Daven had stopped his gloating mid bow. A narrow red track suddenly appeared on the back of Daven’s hand revealing flesh beneath skin. A thin string of red beads dripped down onto the hilt of his sword and stained the blade. Engle knew what was coming next. With a lightening reflex and a flick of his wrist, Daven responded by knocking the boy’s sword from his hand. It was a blind strike, passionless reflex born from years of practice and constant drilling under Engle’s supervision. The boy’s sword fell to the ground with a sickening clatter.

His blood flowed generously on the ground and red puddle formed at his feet. The boy gaped and his wriggled his fingers. Engle expected them to fall to the ground next to his sword. They did not. Daven moved toward the boy, holding his sword level to Tim’s throat.

"I ought to kill you where you stand," his voice scarcely rose above a whisper.

“Enough!” Engle cried. He tossed his precious proof to Delilah and charged through the crowd. “Tell the king to look to his southern border.” He instructed over the noise of the crowd as she fell behind. "I believe you owe this boy ten in gold." Engle said Daven as he maneuvered behind him.

"Engle," Daven exhaled. He lowered his weapon and slowly turned round.

Engle removed his hood with a slight inclination of his head. "Sire, You have not forgotten me. That is touching." He looked past Daven to make sure the boy was still standing. By some miracle it appeared that he had retained all of his fingers and was far luckier than Byron in that respect. Engle brushed roughly past Daven making certain that the contact was enough to knock Daven back a step. He caught Williams’ sword with the toe of his boot and spun back toward its owner. "You have an account to settle with this young gentleman, am I correct?" Engle glanced back at Daven. He did not protest and obediently took the money from his belt and tossed it at the boy.

“That should settle my account.” He returned hoarsely.

"I am glad to see you are putting your skills to such a good use." Engle fingers itched for Daven turn his blade on him. He knelt down and helped the boy pick up his money and his scattered possessions. He pocketed a small leather pouch whose precious contents had burst forth. Engle scooped several the pale blue stones and slipped them into his pocket. All the while he counted the passing seconds until Daven spoke again.

“He has all his fingers. Is that mercy or was it your intention to take his hand as well?” Engle observed, breaking the silence. The crowd was still all around them but had moved back a considerable distance.

Daven gave a ragged laugh. "Should I feel grateful upon receiving reproof from a man of such distinguished honor and wit? That you would risk your life and my father’s anger to come all this way to council me?”

“I cannot vouch for my honor or my wit. You must judge for yourself.” Engle stretched his lips in forced a smile and he met Daven’s gaze evenly. He gently pushed the boy behind and let his fingers play loosely over his sword.

Daven’s face spoke in volumes that his voice never found. His eyes were bloodshot from more than just Delilah’s ale. Engle could see that he had not been sleeping well if at all. His complexion was pale beneath the flush of his humiliation. Daven could say nothing. Engle did not know what possible defense he could make of his actions. After a long silence he shrugged.

Engle took the boy’s hand to lead him away from the crowd.

"Is that the final word from the man who repaid my father's generosity by seducing his queen? Or did she refuse you? Is her virtue still intact?"

Daven struck just as Engle turned to face him. Engle fixed his eyes on Daven’s face and did not blink. The blow fell short, fanning the skin at his throat. Daven held it just shy of contact.

“Why stop when there is so much more for you yet to shame.” Engle replied, pushing the boy behind him.

“Defend yourself. Let us see how well the pupil has learned from his master. I will bathe my sword in your blood!" Daven voice grew louder with each word until he sprayed the ground with his tears and saliva.

Engle fought the instincts he had spent a lifetime honing to keep his hands loose at his side. His brain calculated a dozen different ways to cut the prince down, his hands recalled several others. He would sooner cut-off his arm, rather than act on any one of them.

"Are you so eager to die?” He asked.

Daven was silent yet his brow struggled against betraying anything but rage. He took several shallow breaths until his complexion was no longer purple, only red.

“Do you seek greater reproof?” Engle persevered. “I will give you what you so eagerly seek.” He stepped forward so that Daven’s blade grazed his throat. “If it pleases your soul and your drunkenness, strike me down. I will not oppose you and my honor will not suffer the consequence for it.”

“Raise your sword.” Daven implored him.

“Know this. By my oath to your father and for the sake of the honor of she-whom you have chosen to so publicly besmirch-I should strike you where you stand. I would kill you. It is for her sake and hers alone that I leave you the spoil of your life. Such as it is, it means more to her than the shame of a hundred of such remarks. I’ll not raise my hand to you, even to save my life.” He loosed his sword and tossed it aside. “Do as you will.” He slowly moved back and opened his arms wide. “See if my blood it can reclaim your words."

Daven adjusted his grip but his sword shook more violently with each passing moment. At last he lowered his weapon and let his head drop forward as if too heavy to bear.

Engle turned from one boy to the other. “Come. You must let take care of that for you,” Engle gestured to his injured hand. The young boy nodded in agreement and then retrieved Engle’s sword for him.

Daven kept his head down staring at the cut on his hand, the blood as dripped over his knuckles to form a small stain on the ground. Engle wondered if he noticed how similar the two pools of blood were or if that would make the slightest difference to him now.

“My Lord, I take my leave.” Engle delivered a curt bow. He could not speak with composure.

Monday, September 7, 2009

More is coming...

Life both fuels and intrudes on the creative just as much as any one or any thing else. I promise more is coming. Summer is a busy time for all-as it should be. Never-the-less for you faithful followers I appreciate your patience as the rooms needed painting and I welcomed my first niece.
Saw Julie and Julia last night and it was just the sort of inspiration I needed to get me blogging again. It's Labor Day, school is back and I am back...

Expect another installment of The Raven and the Wolf by the end of the week.

Wednesday, June 3, 2009

The Raven and the Wolf: Chapter 8

The smell of freshly cut grass did nothing to sooth Daven’s dark mood.  He brushed passed several men on the way to the courtyard.  These tried to engage him in conversation or offer a pat on the back.  They had not let up since the games.  His disastrous match during the games was neither worthy of congratulations nor cause for sympathy.  His father made his disapproval abundantly clear and Daven took no satisfaction in taking another man’s hand.  He simply had no choice. 

There were several young maids who had formerly focused their attentions on his brother who now noticed him.  They offered any comfort they could to help him heal the new red scar over his right brow.  He enjoyed their attentions at first but had grown weary of them.  He had never seriously harmed any one in his years of training.  These were times of peace.  What had happened in that circle felt like war and he had not considered till that moment what that might mean or that he might die. His gullet rose every time he recalled the lump of flesh and bone curled about the hilt of Byron’s stripped sword.  He felt his pain as he watched at his pale stunned expression, the overriding shock waves and disorientation as the blood pooled in the dirt-all the agony and disbelief at the sudden loss.  He understood in an instant that there was relief in Byron’s face, as if he wanted Daven to do exactly that.  As if all he wanted was the torment to ease his suffering.  

The congratulations that flowed afterward were distasteful and old men, who thought they understood, simply said:

“There was nothing you could have done.”

Daven reached the stables and found Kallos saddled and waiting for him.  He had been a gift from Engle and was supposed to have been bred from the old Duessite bloodlines.  Such horses were only slightly less fabled than the people who bred them.  He kept the reckless colt stabled just beyond the outer wall of the palace.  Kallos was a brash colt the color of burnished copper.  Daven’s father had given him a grey stallion, an animal equally as prized and beautiful.  Most days he rode Kallos leaving the grey with naught but the stable boys to give him exercise. 

Daven charged down the hill toward Traimiss village.  He stopped short at the small bridge over a watercourse, dug to feed water to the other side of the village.  If he turned east he could follow Engle into Duessa and disappear.  Unfortunately, he knew no matter what wonders might await him there.  It was not his life.   He thought he wanted solitude, but as he looked at the bridge what he really craved was noise and the foulest cup of ale ever brewed. 

Daven charged over the bridge reaching the heart of town in minutes; tossing Kallos leads to the first person he saw, a man weighed down with bolts of heavy cloth.  It was probably pure reflex, but the man dropped his burden and caught the reins.  All his wares were spoiled at his feet in the soft earth.  It never occurred to Daven he gave Kallos into the hands of village tailor instead of the smithy.  The man smiled and bowed in recognition.  He was as pale as the linen he had carried.      

Daven stepped through the door of The Harpy and his heart began to pound.  Immediately assaulting his nostrils was the smell of men and the earth they dug, mingled with the sour stench of cabbage and fermenting ale.  The babble of voices tickled his ears and set a hum in his veins that infused him with a bizarre energy.  The floors were dirt and there was dust kicked up on every service.  The walls were a dark wood panel, stained in patches from unsatisfied stomachs and rowdy drunks who stumbled too hard against them to find the door.

The Harpy was nicknamed for its colorful patroness Mistress Delilah.  She was the only woman in all of Traimiss to run her own establishment.  She never owned her age, but her appearance would have put her near to her fifties.  It was more likely that she was not yet forty. 

She had never been married, drank every man under the table and used language few men dared. The Traimiss Inn was the name on her shingle, but if ever a stranger asked for it by name no one knew what he was talking about.  The Harpy survived despite its many empty rooms and the diseased stench of its larder.

Daven loved it.  Delilah made certain that the ale and the wine never ran dry and all the spirits she served were sufficient to kill the poison of the rancid meat she served.  She always made sure that her girls gave a lot to look at.  They knew their trade and their charms seldom required intoxication to appreciate, though Daven knew better than to sample their wares. 

            He walked inside hoping to find some of the men who had completed the morning watch taking their ease with a few pints.  He was thirsty for whatever the madam was serving.  The sudden dimness inside The Harpy, after the glare of the midday sun temporally blinded him.  While his eyes adjusted Delilah’s dimwitted chore boy stepped forward to block his way.  His name was Simon.  He may well have sprung from the grime around the place.  No one could recall having ever seeing him elsewhere.   He smelled like everything sour and foul in The Harpy.  His manners were as course and rough as the benches and roughly hewn tables. Simon stood a full head taller than Daven but seemed to have never grown into his gangly limbs.   

Daven did not like him.  He knew never express it lest Delilah throw him into the streets.  She was not in the least bit impressed by him and had thrown him out on several occasions albeit with his father’s blessing.

            “Can we help Your Majesty?”  Simon’s voice cracked but there was nothing boyish in his steely gaze.  His dark hair hung like limp tentacles over his eyes and his beard was patchy and red underneath.  Daven suppressed the urge to punch him in the face.

            “Ah let him be.  As long has he pays for his drink and promises not to terrorize my patrons he can stay.”  Delilah barked from across the room. 

Daven raised his purse.  He removed a few coins and tucked them into his belt before tossing the rest across the room.  Simon smiled, revealing his crooked green teeth and stepped aside. 

“As bad as all that?”  She said, catching it in one hand without spilling a drop from the three tall steins she was carrying.  She shook it by her ear and estimating its contents by weight and sound.  No doubt she was accurate to the pence. 

            He had his first stein in hand before he crossed the room.  He closed his eyes and concentrated on the gentle bitterness and slight burn as he drained it dry.  The second mug arrived before the empty hit the table.  A third followed which Daven took care to savor as he walked about greeting the officers.  He stopped at a table where many of his father’s men took their leisure.  He was itching for a fight and set out with broad boasts and less than subtle insults.  It was to no avail.  None of the young men present had approached anything near the level of intoxication required to inflate their sense of invincibility to answer his challenge.  If they needed a reminder of why they ought to refuse, they need only look over Byron who sat at the next table.

            “Come, will no one help me entertain these fine folk,” Daven his eyes came to rest on the square shoulders of Byron.  His stomach gripped hard at the sight of him and their locked eyes for an instant of hatred and admiration.  He turned his head and focused to a young officer named Roberts, who was with him on West Road guarding King Waldhar. 

“There is no retribution if you accept and consider the glory if you prevail.”  Daven continued, watching Byron out of the corner of his eye.  Byron kept to his seat.  His stump was wrapped in dirty gauze and the firm hand of a broad backed, red headed Captain Williams helped bolster his resolve.  Daven acted in self defense but he was not satisfied that he had won.  He carefully avoided any further eye contact and settled down on a bench.  From behind the shield of his stein, he looked over at Byron’s tall form.  A mason could cut the stones of a cathedral by the angles of his tall frame.  He averted his eyes quickly as Byron shifted his weight, probably sensing his gaze.  Daven wondered what would become of him now.  He had acted out of self-defense.  Byron lost control in their contest and would surely have taken Daven’s head had he not done what he had done.

Another hour passed.  No one stood up to him no matter how ridiculous his boasts.  Giving up, he quit The Harpy and ventured into the public square.  He needed a place in the world that did not vibrate or tilt.  He knew he had to keep moving or risk humiliating himself by getting sick on the street.  He tried to raise a fistfight with the same hapless tailor and the man turned and ran.  The rush of a good knock on the jaw would sober him up enough to get back on Kallos so he could pass out unseen in the woods.  Everyone else knew to steer clear of him.  They had their lesson in the past and had crooked noses and missing teeth to prove it. Daven started toward the stables carefully planning each step to stay steady and unnoticed.  If he could make it to Kallos’ stall he would be happy.  He lost count of how many of Delilah’s toxic steins he threw back but his head was keeping score.

            “You would dare argue with me?” He heard someone shouting behind him.  “Do you take me for a fool?” 

            Daven smiled as he slowly turned around to answer his challenger.  A tomato shaped man covered in flour was not the opponent he expected, not that he was in condition to face a more agile one.  A sudden rush flooded his veins and his palms itched with eagerness.  It was Jacob, the baker.  Judging by disfigured knuckles he knew his way around a fistfight.  Since that time he had acquired all the features hazardous to his past and present occupations.  His red face glowed to his fleeting hairline.

            The object of Jacob’s bluster, however, was not Daven but a scraggly ten year-old boy.  Daven had seen him around the village and near the palace gate by the stables.  He first noticed his presence following the millennial celebration.  Daven supposed he must have been separated from his group.   He had seen him lurking about the stables mostly.  It was hard to tell his age.  He was skin over his bones and so pale Daven could see the workings of vein and muscle just below the surface.  His face was never without a smudge of mud or soot and his clothes were little more than rags.  His leggings stopped just above his ankles and he wore some kind of strange sort of coarse knit that barely obliged itself to cover his elbows.  He and his costume looked as though they might disintegrate at any moment.  None of the sculleries or stable boys knew anything about him though several admitted to slipping him food.  He was often the object of their tricks and jokes until Daven put an end to it.  

            "I was promised six for what I done,” said the boy.  He pointed to the two coins in his palm emphatically.  “And this here's only two. I want the rest of what I was promised.”

            "You're lucky to get the two.  I never promised you more than that.  Now get your scrawny carcass out of here before I take them back and call on the sheriff to lock you up as a thief!"           

“You promised me six because you knew I wouldn’t work for you because they promised me four at the smithy.” 

The coins they argued for were of little value but would be sufficient for the boy to buy a ladle of milk, hunk of molded cheese and a half a loaf of bread. Twice that amount would have hardly been an imposition to Jacob.

            “Than better you should a worked for them now shouldn’t you?  At least they would not have noticed your smell!”

            The boy’s face turned red.  His eyes narrowed and his body shook with rage.  He stared down Jacob with an evil eye and a clenched fist.  Jacob laughed.  The boy’s eyes flicked left.  He grabbed one of the loaves and took a defiant bite.  Jacob answered by grabbing his arm roughly and twisting. The boy cried out in pain.

            "That'll be the two I just paid you."

            The boy struggled.  He twisted his head and bit Jacob’s hand.  He then stomped on the instep of his foot.  Jacob yelped in pain.  He lost his grip and the boy bolted for the door.  He was not quick enough and Jacob managed to catch him by the neck through the doorway.

            "You’re paying for more than that bread now!”  Jacob roared.  "You stinky thief, I'm taking this straight out of your hide!  The horsewhip I have in the back should suit you nicely.  And you’ll thank me for the kindness once the sheriff has his chance at you!”

The boy made a horrible screech kicking, scratching and biting anything to break away.   "You are the thief, lousy...cheap.  You didn't pay half of what you owe me.  I cleaned your filthy, stinking shutters!  Your filthy, stinking walls!! Filthy, stinking you!!!  If anyone smells around here it’s you.  I hope the whole town hears me!  You smell like a dead fish and so does your bread.  I’m probably going to die from eating your lousy rotten bread.  Watch out he kills you with that smell of his!!” The boy was screaming at the top of his lungs, pretending to choke and grabbing his stomach in agony.  

Jacob closed his fist and backhanded the boy, sending him flying into the street where he landed on his face at Daven’s feet.  Jacob stomped out after him ready to do more damage.  The boy screamed. 

            "Jacob!" Daven shouted over the top of both of them.  "Is not it enough you beat on your own children? Now you have turned to practicing on the street rats as well?"

            Jacob stopped and slowly raised his eyes.  He was so intent on his prey he did not see who was standing over him.  The boy looked up at Daven warily and noiselessly got to his feet.

            "My lord, this vermin is robbing me.  Ought he not to pay?”

“Yes, I heard what happened.”  Daven mustered sufficient dignity to keep from slurring his speech.  Jacob turned pale.

“The boy claims I offered what no one in their right mind would pay.  Then uses his lies, to justify stealing, my bread."

            "Liar!!" shouted the boy, spitting out a mouthful of dirt.

Jacob raised his hand to strike.  Daven stepped in between and caught his arm.           

"I am inclined to believe the boy,” Daven said.  Then lowering his voice, he added:  “After all he wasn’t lying about the smell.” 

            Beads of sweat formed on Jacob’s brow.  The boy got behind Daven.

            “How much were you supposed to get?  I know Jacob is eager to settle your differences in a legal manner,” said Daven and turned toward the boy.  He had not moved a muscle.  He seemed somewhat bewildered at having Daven arbitrate for him.

            "I was promised six.  He paid me two.  I figure the bread is part of my pay if he gives me no more coin.”

Jacob grunted.

            Daven held out his hand to Jacob.  He grumbled as he placed two coins in his palm.  Daven frowned and wiggled his thumb and Jacob added two more. 

            “That wasn’t so very hard.”  Daven heard himself slurring his S’s slightly and tried to stand up straighter to compensate. Daven raised his brow and nodded his chin.

            “May I take my leave?  I have had trouble with rats lately had have a lot to clean up after.” Jacob bowed and lumbered away.

            The boy reached in to grab his spoils.  Daven was quicker and caught hold of his wrist.  

            “You are a bold one.” 

            “Thank you milord.”  The boy wrinkled his nose as Daven exhaled.  “I am hungry.  I’d like to take what’s mine.”  He was wearing a funny brown pouch around his neck that caught Daven’s eye.

            “You mean what is mine?”  Daven reached a finger toward it and the boy clutched it away.

            “Milord, I did the work.  Doesn’t that mean the money is mine?”

            “I earned it.  I call it a fine.  He broke your contract so by law he must pay a fine to the crown.  I am the law today so he paid that to me.  Nothing in the law says I must pay that back to you.”

            The boy’s jaw dropped.

            “Do you think that is fair?”

            “No, milord.  I’m not afraid to say so.”  He crossed his arms.

            “It is however just, if justice be defined by the letter of the law.”

            “I don’t know about what is written in books much but I know what’s right and that money is mine.  I earned it.”

            Daven smiled.  He knelt down to the boy’s level, steadying himself with his empty palm.

            “You’re not afraid of anything are you?”

            “If I let myself be afraid I might never survive.  Might I have my money, Sire?”

            Daven chuckled and handed it to him along with a piece of gold he kept tucked away in his sleeve.

            “You’ve earned it.”

            The boy looked down and shook his head.  “The gold isn’t mine sire.”

            “You will not take it?”

            “I should be accused of stealing then.  I could not take it.”

            “You truly are a singular creature.  Do you have a name?”

            “Yes.”

            “Will you not tell me it or should I keep on calling you boy?”

            The boy looked around nervously.  Daven waited and waited.  At last the boy cleared his throat and said in a whisper:

            “Tim.  I come when you call me Tim.”

            Daven laughed until he nearly choked.

            “Truly Tim, we need such jesters as you in my father’s court.  Do you have any family?”

            “None living that I recall.”

            Tim seemed to tilt sideways and Daven put a hand down to steady himself.  Just beyond the boy a small group of spectators began to gather.  Daven put his hands on Tim’s shoulders and stood up. 

            “I see you at the stables sometimes.  Do you know the game where they play with wooden swords?”  Daven was careful not to let his voice carry to the crowd. 

Tim looked round behind him.  “I don’t like people looking at me.”

“And I always draw a crowd.  Listen, I’m in no shape to face these people but if we give them a bit of entertainment perhaps they’ll go away after its over.”  He winked at him and the boy’s eyes brightened in a way that Daven caught his breath. 

“I don’t think your right.  Do I have to do what you say milord?”

Daven’s gaped at him.  He had never met a bolder creature.  “You are extraordinary.   Of course you must do what I say but I’ll make it easy for you.  I promise not to let you get hurt.”            "What kind of game is it that you have to promise me that?"

            “Swords are the only game I like to play.”

“We have no wooden swords.”  Tim protested.

“You have played with the other boys have you not?  Once I stopped them from teasing you I know the stable hands taught you to play.  I saw it.” 

            The boy nodded slowly and bit his bottom lip. 

            “I dare say when I am not about they still plague you.  But answer me this, what do you think will happen after you tell them you crossed swords in a game with me?"  Daven looked at his sword and judged it too big for the boy.  So he drew a long dagger that he kept at his belt and handed it to him.  “You cannot use a blade if you can’t lift it.”

            Tim nodded but he only had eyes for the sword.  His face was full of wonder and delight.

            Daven chuckled.  “This is an exhibition nothing more.  I will be on the defense.”

            “How long do we play to?”

            "My lord, he is a child.  There is no glory or honor in a challenge such as that."  Daven recognized the booming voice of Captain Williams.  He must have been called out to put an end to it.  Daven’s stomach flipped.  This was far more public than he planned.  Williams’ challenge only made matters worse.  He looked at Tim who was making tentative swings at the air.  If he called things off now, it would be an embarrassment for him but would Tim suffer humiliation?  No he had to give the boy a chance to look credible. 

            “Milord.”  Williams’s called again.

Daven raised his hand to silence him, and kept his eyes trained on the boy.  He spoke carefully so that only Tim could hear him.

“I promise to recommend you for a squire-my own should I be at liberty to choose.  Right now we even have a small boy who came to us the only survivor from an attack of highwaymen.  My father arranged that he should go through training when he is old enough.”

            "I already earned my money."  The boy returned evenly.  

"You are quick and wiry.  I promise you won’t get hurt.”  Then more loudly he added:  “We will each make five passes only.  William’s will count.  The object is for…” he gestured towards Tim and caught his look of alarm out of the corner of his eye.  “The boy here to make contact.  Do you have a decision?”

“Sire I beg you…” Williams interjected.  His face was as red as his beard.

“The king and his subjects commend even the smallest of knights!”  Daven returned.  He marched over to Williams and held out his hand.  “So our games may be without dangerous interruption and so my fine boy may have the dignity of a real weapon.”  Daven knew he could not refuse him. 

The Harpy emptied into the street.  This had to look like a lesson at the very least.   Daven walked back toward Tim with Williams’ sword in his hand.  He traded him for the long dagger he had offered him earlier.  There was definitely iron in the boy’s eyes.

“Tell me, you do mean to win?”

"I can always use ten in gold."  Tim took hold of the sword with both hands and no sign of weakness.

“I think you will handle this better than any of them think.  I promise I will not forget what you do here today.”

Just then Daven felt a pricking at the back of his neck.  He looked round and sensed yet another disapproving gaze coming from hooded figure just joining the crowd.  If he had paid closer attention he would have known the stranger at once.  Only in the luxury of hindsight did he consider how easily a lingering look might have averted disaster.